Only A Second Poem by Soran M. H

Only A Second

Rating: 4.7


Clouds are passing differently
Always in change:
Shapes, colours, directions…
Sometimes become glasses
In the eyes of all divided territory!
Other times become
White hats on the tops of high mountains

They come
From the far orange horizon
Like a lily
Full of hope, beauties
But sad with the howling wind

They are not sure
Whether the soil
Which has not seen -
any shore of a wide sea yet
Will allow snowflakes
Enough time to live?

Or giving them a chance
To share a smile
With silent chimneys
Before
Consolatory tears of clouds
Are announced
And put a black banner
On the dusty trees
Beside long- elusive roads

Till yesterday
They were
Bright, full of life
But now
Motionless, without soul
Out of minds
Absent from all records
Such as
Never existed

Tuesday, July 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
relationship between a story of one drop and the weakness of human being
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Reed 26 December 2019

A wonderful, soulful poem with great phrases such as long-elusive roads and silent chimneys

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Soran M. H 26 December 2019

the beauty is in the eye of the beholder you are the great poet that is why you are recognizing the genuine works and considering them.. all the best

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2019

Directions! ! Romance of nature with, The fragrance of life! Yesterday is gone too soon with the wind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 January 2019

Like a lily Full of hope, beauties But sad with the howling wind... But now Motionless, without soul Out of minds...... your poets notes are very revealing dear poet.......... human being, weakness, , very nice poem. tony

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Soran M. H 09 March 2020

Dear Dr Tony...it is so nice to hear from you this wonderful comment...I hope you have enjoyed reading my humble work...thanks again

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Suresh Kumar Ek 28 November 2020

Beautiful clouds Without any narrow borders Nicely penned

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Suresh Kumar Ek 02 October 2020

From clouds to real life The poem brings a spectacular feeling. Thanks Soran

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

Consolatory tears of clouds Are announced And put a black banner On the dusty trees Beside long- elusive roads- - -you draw such great scenes with your words! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

Other times become White hats on the tops of high mountains- - - - > tickled me with the originality of this and how very well it conjured up the image! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 09 September 2020

This is a glorious piece......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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