Who Knows? Poem by Soran M. H

Who Knows?

Rating: 4.8


All were happy:
The obstetrician
Nurses
Parent...
but the new born baby
started to cry!

Who Knows?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 27 June 2020

Dear Mahtab Bangalee, thank you for reading this poem and your amazing comment, Best Regards

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Soran M. H 28 June 2020

Dear poet Rini Markle thanks for commenting on this poem, I hope you have enjoyed it, Regards

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 28 June 2020

the baby came from known to unknown /cry of joy/despair or is it pre-language language of certain feeling post womb life...it has that poetic ambiguity

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Soran M. H 28 June 2020

Dear poet Yoonoos Peerbocus، yes you are right that is the question we should ask after reading this poem, many thanks for your useful comment

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Soran M. H 27 June 2020

Dear Clive Culverhouse a million thanks for your comments, you are one of the best conscious intellectual poet and very good reader too, always you are the first writes comment on my poems, I wish you very good health and happiness, all the best with Regards

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 October 2020

It is the first breath Makes us cry Nice poem

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

How you made me smile with this sweet film clip! ! ! It seems tragic that the baby's first experience with life is an unpleasant one to him but oh how we mothers want to hear that cry and how frightening it is when it doesn't and everyone rushes over to the baby and things are whispered and things are done that cannot be seen from the delivery table and then- -oh, the baby cries and waves her red arms and legs around! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+

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Terry Craddock 19 September 2020

a beautiful flow, all happy listing from professionals to parents, then the turn of baby crying, but all relax when the baby cries first breath taken after I was born I refused to cry, the doctor held me by the feet upside down but I did not cry, smacked by, then again harder, third time really hard, but I did not stop crying for about 6 months :)

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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2020

Well conceived and wonderfully crafted with artistic brilliance. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Soran.

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Paul Brookes 30 August 2020

A great write a little wit and gentleness too Enjoyed

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