Love Is In Loyalty Poem by Chan Mongol

Love Is In Loyalty

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LOVE IS IN LOYALTY

Once you fall in love with the tie of souls of each other;
No outer force can break that tie unless one is a betrayer.
Relationship cannot be built with sex or with flowers;
It is so sacred and grows with your feelings and cares.
You both can be handicaps, starving poor and begging daily;
But your thoughts and efforts are to live with family firmly!
Never get a greedy partner who will make holes in your boat;
The selfish, onboarding your vessel, will chock your family's throat.
Outsider will get recognition as the citizen after fulfilling condition;
When the host surrenders to the guest cannot be justification.
Who sponsors whom with most dedication remains the question;
It is no love if no loyalty from the guest but increasing violation.
Life is short for all and in it, none gets the 100 percent satisfaction;
A guest needs to accept few odds to maintain and repair relation.

Wednesday, October 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: compromise,families,love,loyalty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 07 October 2020

A well crafted poem. Truly exceptional...5 stars*****

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