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Monday, April 4, 2016

Be Loyal

Rating: 5.0
Intuition, confusion and suspicion
They may not bring peace and satisfaction!
Obedience, loyalty and trustworthy notion
Guide a human to upgrade, to promotion! !

In any harm and in breach of trust
People always move in gust to dust!
Then, terror and horror bring pain
Madness, crimes with ache give us chain! !

What are you? How long new
Just expendable! Like morning dew!
Your bureaucracy and arrogance
Alarming situation, very intolerance! !

Know thyself, what are you
You are also in death's queue!
I will kick you like a ball
Your pride shall have a fall! !

Do not be a dirty Boss
And give us all the loss!
That is not fair, that is not right
To stab in eyes, to stop our sight! !

Believe in the truth and change your views
Say the magic word, give us the news!
Don't apply evil to make us poor and to get us lost
Encourage us to let us live at the state's cost! !

Intuition, confusion and suspicion
They may not bring peace and satisfaction!
But obedience, loyalty and trustworthy notion
Guide a human to upgrade, to promotion! !
Chan Mongol
Topic(s) of this poem: loyalty
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COMMENTS
Bernard F. Asuncion 01 March 2020
A well crafted noble poem......10+++
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Britte Ninad 25 June 2018
nice writings like to quote - Intuition, confusion and suspicion They may not bring peace and satisfaction! But obedience, loyalty and trustworthy notion Guide a human to upgrade, to promotion! ! ..... to promote everyone or everything there is need conscience with self knowledge (wisdom) .... nice 10+++
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Kathy Van Kurin 18 October 2016
Chan Mongol, Yes the negative sinful aspects of humanity will only lead to death. The last stanza particularly expresses what the whole poem revolves around. I truly appreciate your well thought out descriptive thought provoking work. Thanks for writing.......................Kathy
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A creative and compelling composition.
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Oluwole Michael 17 June 2016
Chan, you're truly a rare GEM. All the ryhmes are worth it. Beautiful choice of words such like PUN - a play on word. I like your style always. Just keep the ink running.
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Oluwole Michael 17 June 2016
Chan, you're truly a rare GEM. All the ryhmes are worth it. Beautiful choice of words such like PUN - a play on word. I like your style always. Keep the ink running.
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Intuition, confusion, suspicion words selected in such a beauty and poem highlights meaningful.
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