Love And Loyalty Poem by Chan Mongol

Love And Loyalty

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Her mind was occupied somewhere;
She was just a back stabber, betrayer!

Drama was played to take a free ride;
Shrewd woman revolted against guide!

Her aim was not to make a family;
But to know path to goldmine, really!

She first smelled innocence of her prey;
Thus, hunter gives the prey last day.

When love and sincerity are intense;
Traitors find doors for own presence!

Who can have a trusting, lasting family?
Ties needed with parents, kids, generally!

Couple needs time to build love mutually;
Common interests are needed, so badly!

But loyalty is important for the boss fellow;
At work, home and school what you do!

Sometimes, take the loss, change direction;
Accept what the luck and fate had done!

Family matter is crucial and need to be wise,
Love at first sight can cheat to drive to vice!

To make a family is not a part time matter;
To think over and over to marry, is better!

Check the blood group, horoscope, mind;
Activities for love and loyalty, you will find!

Love and loyalty come from the gut and is must;
No accord but family, beneficiary need the trust!

I spoke my mind in the freedom of expressions;
Expression, experience vary in various persons.

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Monday, February 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: family,love,loyalty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 01 March 2020

Loyal Pledge, CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! On behalf of all fellow poets, PH family and our family we offer a title of honour to poet Chan Mongol as, Loyal Pledge. This title of honour is offered to him due to his literary perseverance. We hope, all poets and visitors will like this. Best regards From Wonder Yasmine. Above text I copied for you, so you remember again where that is derived from

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Shaun Cronick 01 March 2020

Salutations warmly given to your good self Chan. Well done sir! ! Your great poem deserves this fine accolade of Member Poem Of The Day bestowed on It and you. I wish you well Chan and may God Bless and Keep you and the loved ones around you.

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The Muse 01 March 2020

Congratulations on being selected as Poet of the Day!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 March 2020

PRAISE IS ALWAYS WELCOME ESPECIALLY WHEN ONE DESERVES IT CONGRATULATIONS 4 THE POD

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Savita Tyagi 01 March 2019

To make a family is not a part time matter. Excellent poem. Congratulations for member poem place.

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Arun Sahoo 05 June 2023

reallity of modern world

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 April 2020

Family matter is crucial and need to be wise, Love at first sight can cheat to drive to vice! To make a family is not a part time matter; To think over and over to marry, is better! thinking very seriously about the family life and love and sincerity and faithfulness. very fine poem dear Chan, tony

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Rajnish Manga 02 March 2020

A very friendly advice about choosing a compatible life-partner to ensure a lasting happiness in married life. Thanks & Congrats.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 March 2020

Heartiest Congratulations Chan for the Poem of the day. Love and loyalty are a must for a strong relationship and bonding.....Beautiful poem....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 March 2020

Love and loyalty come from the gut.... pragmatic expression! Many congratulations for this fabulous work being featured today as Poem of the Day!

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