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Thursday, June 16, 2016

A Friend Is In My Hallucination

A friend is in my hallucination

She is a soft spoken, a caring figure
Her brought up was in a loving family there!
Sweet smile in her face, like a flower
She is so shiny like a twinkling star! !

She is neither a doctor nor an engineer
She is so happy and wants to be a homemaker!
A kind, polite and a respectable woman
An accomplished lady and so much she can! !

Knowledge is the power and she is for that
She loves nature, agriculture, she is intelligent!
I write for her and she loves my rhymes with attention
She eagerly listens when I look at her in my recitation! !

Such a lovely, desirable, happy woman
Who can fix things when they are broken!
She doesn't break but she melts to shine
Such a wonderful, charismatic woman is mine! !

I don't want thousands but few who read
She is one good fan whom I really need!
She knows well that I give and I don't take
She knows me that I am real, not a fake! !

My lady often wants my lap as her pillow
She wants to look at the sky from my window!
She is an artist with love and beauty in her nature
She lives in my hallucination with sips of beer!
Chan Mongol
Topic(s) of this poem: friend
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COMMENTS
Lyn Paul 26 June 2018
A beautiful write filled with dreams of someone special.
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
Lyn, thank you very much for your fine comment.
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Chandan Dey 26 June 2018
Dear Chan, your loving Hallucination has made you write a wonderful poem. Well crafted, well penned, Chan Chandan
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
Chandan, thank you for your time to read and review the poem
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 June 2018
Beautifully inscribed on friend and hallucination. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
My dear respectable friend Kumarmani, your enthusiastic comments always empower my spirit to go on. Thank you so much for your attention.
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Alam Sayed 26 June 2018
Your friend is a beautiful machine.
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
She is as she is. I wouldn't say her a machine. For sure, she is the dream lady. Thanks for the comment, Alam.
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Mahtab Bangalee 26 June 2018
superb love in Hallucination for a friend look I loved loved very much brought a rose with thorn, brought a deep breath together, brought a chirping of birds, brought a flute of Jame Galway brought a rhythmic heart together we brought everything A SOUL - on the wings of bee through the petals of rose and into the buds we become ONE and ONE LOVE great
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
Wow! You wrote well. I love the rhythm of your poem. Thanks. Mahtab.
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 26 June 2018
Such a nice poem... I like it
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
Lungelo, you are so kind to leave a nice comment. I thank you for reading it.
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Mary Skarpathiotaki 26 June 2018
GOOD! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! BRAVO! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
Mary, your two words got an atomic inspiration for me. Thank you dear poet.
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Britte Ninad 26 June 2018
excellent loving poem except last line- She lives in my hallucination with sips of beer! ! may be sipping of beer is beautiful and charismatic to this poet but I am not interested in that.... overall poem really is so goodly composed...love in touchstone method.... wow
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
Notable fellow poet Britte, your comments are so inspirational for me. But I don't talk that much to thank to kind people like you are. I understand that I am not your type. Hehehehe....Listen, thanks a lot for everything.
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Terry Craddock 16 June 2016
'Always a smile in her face, like a flower! ' a blessing and joy to behold, a radiant family blooms, before teenage testing years 10+ God Bless
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Chan Mongol 26 June 2018
Terry, I am glad that could cater a poem to please you. Thanks for the comment. Take care.
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