Days when I paced along the narrow bunds
Raised across the stretches of paddy fields
All alone in synchrony with nature's moods
Amid stooping stalks of ripe golden paddy
Startled by the sudden surge of a playful breeze
A flock of parrots flew up with stalks of paddy,
Holding fast in each one's curved and red beak,
Stunning me by the beauty of the flying greenery
Mastery of their creator is amazingly flawless,
The unique thin circle in red colour around the necks
A gift of necklace He had presented is marvelous
They always wear it for the beauty that decks
Below, the stalks stood bowing to Mother Earth
In a reverential posture and a surrendering breath,
Like transcending Sanyasins in emotional Bhajan
They swayed in the melody of the ballad heard afar
Little sparrows were busy storing rice for off-season
In the newly made nests hung from coconut leaves
They cheerfully chirped and perched, sung and danced
I wished I were a sparrow to fly high and live in a nest
Frightened by a water snake slithered across
I stepped back fixing my eyes cautiously on it
Feeling, meanwhile, a toad being pressed under the feet
I loosened it entailing in my falling down to the mud
Far away the threshing women were singing in chorus
The reaping men around joined them to sing in rhyme and rhythm
The harvest songs sung in their traditionally popular tunes
Praising deities were a revival treat for the soul and the soil
In the clearances cows and calves were grazing gaily
Kids looking after them were playing games freely
I wished I could join them, but for my limitations
My heart lingered behind with them and I proceeded
At a distance yet to cover a potter couple appeared
Carrying head loads of large bamboo baskets heaped
With new pots arranged and secured by strong coir net
Humble were they to wait at the cross-bund till I passed
By dusk I reached home where grandma was anxious
I noticed the glow in her old eyes to see me safe back
She alone realized I was too small for such a hard journey
In the bed I could feel her silent sobs and solemn prayers
Next morning we talked on parrots and sparrows,
Water snakes and snake poison, eagles and jackals,
Potters and potter's wheel, dedication and devotion
Above all, love of God for the less cared and helpless
A poem by DPN
The poet's recollections of his childhood. He was as free as a bird enjoying the beautiful and mighty creations of God dwelling on mother earth! ! A sparkling picture of nature with elegant imagery is presented in the poem. Thanks DPN.
Thank you Ramadas. If the poem rouses the childhood memories of the reader I am happy
You have brought alive all those village scenes which as a child I too enjoyed! The potter couple you have described in such a way that i feel you have granted rebirth to the same couple I used to see often on my way to the school! Enjoyed this lovely poem that has aroused in me a lot of nostalgic memories! Top marks!
Thank you Valsa George.Potters were a part of village life.But today no such people are seen anywhere. Thank you
The scenic beauty of nature that marvels a child has been brilliantly expressed in this poem.In a village surrounding, plants, animals, birds and humans coexist peacefully - - -Their life is melodious in spite of hardship. Let me quote- - Little sparrows were busy storing rice for off-season In the newly made nests hung from coconut leaves They cheerfully chirped and perched, sung and danced I wished I were a sparrow to fly high and live in a nest
Thank you Mrs. Bharathi Nayak. Thank you for your appreciation on the childhood memories of a small boy
, This is a beautiful poem on nature and journey having touching expression and nice collocation. I love much the lines stated below. Potters and potter's wheel, dedication and devotion Above all, love of God for the less cared and helpless
Thank you great bro.I enjoy your comments. Thank you very much
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An absolutely wonderful poem with many profound memories to cherish. Those paddy fields, harvest songs, water snakes are no more to be seen or heard.
Thank you Devi. Time hides everything