In Search Of A Goddess Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
In Search Of A Goddess
Every dawn is dear to me.
It's then that I see her blushes
reflected in the eastern sky.
While I wander here in her search
she's playing hide and seek
teasing me in painful tiffs.
I am lost.
Tell me breeze, tell me bees
have you met her on your way?
She's beauty embodied
She's the lamp of truth
She's the Goddess I seek.
They smile and mumble,
"We have seen that most beautiful lass.
She hides in pure hearts.
When she peeps out at dusk
The western sky reflects her Bindi"
I am left to wander endlessly
between dawns and dusks
striving to find out her and her hidings
Sir, your incessant quest for Goddess has bestowed you a sublime piece of poetry! Your lucid expression makes this composition utterly magnificent carrying profound spiritual intensity..Full score!
I have read this magnificent poem before. The following lines of your poem impresses me a lot: 'Tell me breeze, tell me bees have you met her on your way? '
A Beauty of creation, composed by your golden heart for the 100th Poem Celebration, on Poem Hunter, dear Parameswaran Sir. I have enormously enjoyed your poetic words, your 100th poem full of brilliance is in the meantime a Masterpiece! Congratulations, dear Poet.
Tell me breeze, tell me bees...I love the delicate expression. This is a fabulous poem dear poet. It gives me immense pleasure to revisit this wonderful poem.
This is such a beautiful poem full of tranquility. Scrolling I see my comment left before still want to write again how much I enjoyed reading this poem every time I click on it.
Tell me breeze, tell me bees have you met her on your way? I am jealous of this profound inquisition to mild breeze! I sincerely admire this enormous beauty in this great poetic expression!
Thank you very much Dr. Dillip. Since the characters involved are mild and gentle their dialogue is also supposed to be gentle.Hope I am correct?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 11:56:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful poem and a pleasure to read again.
Thank you Savitaji. I do pray for your safety especially when the whole city of NY is under the treat of the pandemic. LOKA SAMASTHA SUKHINO BHAVANTU
Thank you Savitaji. I can think of your stress and strain to keep away from the virus. LOKA SAMASTHA SUKHINO BHAVANTU