It Is Goota Lit De Fire Time Agin Poem by Terence George Craddock

It Is Goota Lit De Fire Time Agin



it is goota
lit de fire
time agin
to get de hot water
so de women do do
dem hours long showers
that de 2 daughters
de wife be de quick one

de daughters take de hours and de hours
it is not de good thing dem teenage daughters
de 2 of dem with de hours showers
it is de feed de fire feed de fire all night
long every night de night time de slaveries
but it is de families fatha responsibilities

Saturday, November 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,responsibility,water,watering,work
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in November 2020 on the 22&29.11.2020.
Dedicated to all fathers with teenage daughters.
An adapted ending version, of my inbox sent message, to the poet Deluke Muwanigwa, after discussing his poem 'A Walk In The Park; to which I replied with the poem 'A Dark Nighttime Park Is Not The Same As A Daytime Park'.
Original version of the split image 'Yup De Father Knows Where De Hot Water Goes', by the poet Terence George Craddock.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 28 November 2020

Nicely penned Poetry. Families father's responsibility. And daly chores of the family life.

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