Invisible Beauty Poem by Soran M. H
Invisible Beauty
Invisible Beauty
O contemporary poet
leave the visible planets in space
the sun, moon, stars - even the rain.
Often used by poets;
Liberate your pen from nostalgia
search for the invisible beauty
hiding as priceless treasure
within the purest souls
and within farthest horizons
which will never fade
And your note clarifies all doubts. I write what I feel and sometimes surreal and philosophical. Again I say well written 10+
Don't you dare remove this very intelligent and instructive poem. Grrrr! The first four lines are very poetic..... I like the insertion of a one line stanza..... the last four lines is a call for creativity that creates a desire within the reader to do just that. If you want to fiddle with it, go ahead but leave this poem up and rename your 2nd poem. Please! ! ! 10
This is an exhortation to all poets to depart from cliches and hackneyed expressions! A longing for the past also is there in most of the poems. I know it is there in my poems! Instead of finding beauty in the moon and stars, learn to find beauty on a wrinkled face. Instead of retiring to the past, learn to live in the present and accept its challenges. In my opinion, this is a beautiful and meaningful poem, Soran!
Liberate your pen from nostalgia- - - - - -> now that is a well-turned well-expessed well-done line! ! ! ! Succinct, lovely word choice, and a call to action at the same time! ! !
A beautiful and straightforward write that conveys kindness and love woven by one who has a compassionate heart. Top marks! ! ! ¿
Poetry is an encompassing and diverse art. A Poet can explore varied themes and areas. Yes, the insight of the brilliant Poet is indeed commendable.. Invisible beauty must be given emphasis in our writings to understand humanity better.
A wonderful and meaningful poem. A noble call to make our pen soar to the realm of the unknown and the beauty of those who are seldom or not even recognized.
How very deeply felt! Beautiful and noble, Words that uphold The kindness Of an extraordinary And ever compassionate Soul.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/16/2024 11:32:47 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A brave call, believe me I have written so many poems on social injustice, human sufferings, liberation etc but you don't find readers for it since we all come across such things in our daily life and we all being humans we feel their pains, sorrows, sufferings etc and we want to forget it as quickly as possible hence we look for some alternate which will please or ease our tensions. Your poem is very good.