I'm Intellectual Ghost? Poem by Sando Hussam
I'm Intellectual Ghost?
I float in air, but don't be scared,
my wisdom is beyond compare,
no need for glasses, eyes can't see,
my knowledge fills the void, you'll see,
Oh, I'm the intellect ghost, you see,
no need for books or library,
I don't learn how to scare and fright,
and I take the fear out of your sight,
no need for pens or paper sheets,
my words will stay
and your mind will repeat it,
and though I'm intangible,
my presence will leaves you comprehensible,
I'm the master of wit and quick-scan,
healthy mind will laugh with me, not scream in fear,
Great satire using self in the poem. I liked the flow and the tone.
I like intellect ghost specially when to write such poems, you are one of them to bring the darker side of humans. Full ****
Self proclaimed? Don't beat your ghost drums of intellect. I am getting scared of you. Thoughtful poems with enough shocks.
Thanks for the comment on my June showcase of PH poems. : ) bri
'your mind will repeats, ' I suggest 'your mind will repeat' or '...minds will repeat' and...'will leaves you' change to 'will leave you'. Ain't/isn't English FUN! ! ? bri
'how to scare and fright, ' I don't think 'fright' is ever used as a verb. The verb would be 'frighten'. To keep the fright/sight rhyme, I'd use 'cause fright'. ;)
Last line is very true dear poet.But I enjoyed this new ghost.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Subject is very interesting, I like the Ghost's stories. Not seen one but can imagine.