I Wish. Poem by Randhir kaur

I Wish.

Rating: 5.0


Maybe, I was blind to know that 'Love is a fairy tale which looks nice in movies'.You're like a song, an animation, beautiful and temporary.
I wish I had lost stars. I wish I was not a writer.I wish God made me normal, detached, mature, hard and a real women.

Tuesday, April 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hurt,love,sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Hopkins 21 April 2020

Very heartfelt poem, RK

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2020

'Love is a fairy tale which looks nice in movies'.You're like a song, an animation, beautiful and temporary. You wrote beauiful and temporary...........even in the so called married life, love wanes in the course of time and familiarity. then i think and come to the conclusion love is a mystery. one who finds a lasting real love is a very happy man or a woman

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Love is not a fairy tale...but i wish it was! May be love is temporary.....but still worth it, and beautiful too! You say you are not a writer....yet, you are a sweet poetess! .......10

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 May 2020

Love is not love without pain and suffering. Better to have a cold heart and enjoy life. Nice poem. Loved it.

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 30 April 2020

your original way is itself a fine poetry

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 April 2020

A Heartfelt poem. " Raat to vaqt Ki paband hai dhal jayegi Dekhna ye hai charaaghoñ ka safar kitna hai." (Waseem Barelavi)

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Kostas Lagos 21 April 2020

Love can be too painful...this poem is so good that it hurts

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