Sky... Poem by Randhir kaur

Sky...

Rating: 4.8


I
am girl
with a heart
who want to fly
high, no aim, but just want to touch that sky..

Sky...
Monday, June 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sky
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Live every day as if it were going to be your last; for one day you're sure to be right."
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 10 June 2016

One never knows when that last day will be. Live to the fullest, Randhir. I am sure you will touch the sky. P.S. You can just click on reply, under each comment instead of using the above comment box. That way each person that you reply to will be notified by Poemhunter and they can know to come back to your poem to read your reply to their comment.

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Randhir Kaur 10 June 2016

Many thanks Kelly..it means a lot... And thank you for the information, yes I will do this..

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Nosheen Irfan 10 June 2016

This poem is full of positive energy. A girl must dream high n try to pursue her dreams. This poem is very motivating for girls. A girl with a heart can touch the sky. A beautiful poem.

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Randhir Kaur 10 June 2016

Thank you Nosheen for the review...A girl with a heart can touch the sky..it have so different two meaning.. Well taken dear...

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Dr. Antony Theodore 06 February 2021

I am girl who wants to fly. All poets who are true in their hearts want to fly. you are one of those poets. tony

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Varsha M 24 December 2020

I read about it in news. Nice to see your poem on this site. This is really beautiful verse for every girl to remind them they sre also somebody.

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Randhir Kaur 25 December 2020

In news? I didnt get it Ma'am. Please let me know. Thank you so much.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 24 December 2020

i just want to fly and know the freedom of life and the joy in the act of flying. very good poem. tony

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Siddartha Montik 30 July 2017

Touch that Sky! ! I am sure you will! nice expression!

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Kishan Negi 02 June 2017

Hi Randhir, what a lovely poem with marvellous image. Of course, you are a wonderful girl who dares to touch the blue sky. I wish you could. kishan

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