Fairy Tales Poem by Konab Ghazanfar

Your poem is love. I like it. I like the depth of your thoughts and vision though you convey it in a simple way. A beauty.

t it's beautiful.....very beautiful poem

A poetical convincing art work. keep it up

Wowwww........ an awesome write that echos so many of my own feelings.

thank you so much. stay blessed..

3 – I tried to determine the meaning of Seven Skies & think you refer to this Google offering: " In religious or mythological cosmology, the seven heavens refer to seven levels or divisions of Heaven." It sounds like his " Rays" are very powerful! i also found reference to a TV station. After line 4, things seem pretty clear. i 'get the picture'! ! ! bri :) p.s. I wonder if my friend Akhtar 'sent you' to me. hmm?

2 - In the first half of your poem, the punctuation is not as i learned to use periods and commas. " timorous" (a word i'm not used to using) could mean several different feelings***; i'd try to be more specific. *** " showing or suffering from nervousness, fear, or a lack of confidence"

1 - it is difficult for me to know how to change some of your wording for it to sound " right" to me i.e. the way i would arrange the words. for example: " Listen Of Soften Flute, And Saw Dancing Fires" these 2 lines follow 2 other lines in which there are present tense verbs [Expire & Retire] I don't know if Listen is meant as a noun or a verb. And, with " Saw" , you begin to change verb tenses, mostly to past tense verbs, for the rest of the poem.

During a total solar eclipse may stars that are not visible due to sunlight come before our sight. Hakim Momin Khan Momin says, " Tum mere pas hote ho goya Jab koi dossra nahiN hota." a heart touchin love poem by Konab Ghumman (By the way I couldn't find the meaning of Konab.)

And Mighty Heart Blushed.I Hold His Hand, And Gently Whisper In His Ear, YOU Know What! Sometimes‘FAIRY TALES'Become True.