Dream Of Seven Colours Poem by Konab Ghazanfar

Dream Of Seven Colours

Rating: 3.3


If it's Allowed
In Bright Stars,
Without Seeing Time,
I Want To See,
ADream OfSeven Colours,
Without Blinking Eyes,
To Hold Your Hand,
A Promise,
That Never Changes Its Shade,
Though Time Will Pass,
It Will Remain In Minds,
And Shine In Eyes.
From Heaven To Earth,
In Secret Of Stars,
That's What I Would Keep Along,
A Moment I Won't Let It Go,
Is The Moment Of Love.

Friday, March 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Gull 10 March 2019

A Promise, That Never Changes Its Shade, Though Time Will Pass, It Will Remain In Minds, And Shine In Eyes. wow great dream

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amna amna 10 March 2019

Such a brilliant poem..........I think the poem is mind touching

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Huma Mir 11 March 2019

wow.dream of seven colors... how thoughtful - - -beautifully describe element of nature.

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M Asim Nehal 11 March 2019

Great imageries and fantastic flow, I liked it. nothing less than 10+++

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 March 2019

Dear Poetess! You have captured an animated image of love wonderfully. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 June 2019

From Heaven To Earth, In Secret Of Stars, That's What I Would Keep Along, A Moment I Won't Let It Go, Is The Moment Of Love......./// superb expression

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Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2019

From white light of love diverge the seven colours of life and then converge back in the white light again. a beautiful poem.

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Ahmer Ali 24 March 2019

A wonderful poem.Without Blinking Eyes, To Hold Your Hand, A Promise, That Never Changes Its Shade, Though Time Will Pass, It Will Remain In Minds, And Shine In Eyes.

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Konab Ghumman 15 March 2019

nice to see you here all friends. hope you all are fine.thanks for your views be blessed.

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Nadeem Ishaque 13 March 2019

There is some nice poetic expression here such as dreaming in seven colors without seeing time and without blinking an eye. Well captured eternal essence of the moment of true love.

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