I Quest For Safety, I Buried My Wishes,
I'm Fighting Above All The Fears.
I Couldn't Utter, I Haven't My Secrets,
My Objects Shouted Beyond My Hearing.
My Vision, My Life, My Thoughts,
I Alone Stood Beyond My Desires.
I Need Pure Soul, To Peep Inside,
I Submerge Thoughts Beyond My Shores.
In the moments when desire fills you up with joy and takes one to a dream like world. Those moments are precious. So artistically expressed in this poem.
Need Pure Soul, To Peep Inside, I Submerge Thoughts Beyond My Shores. philosophical and spiritual. i was sensing your great need to go beyond what i earthly. thanku. dear poetess. tony
The second line of each couplet is very powerful, poetically expressive and builds to a climax. You have sustained this in each of the four couplets. Please keep writing. A line such as submerge thoughts beyond my shores could very well have been from a very well known poet.
Amusing poem,10+++++++++ I Need Pure Soul, To Peep Inside, To Submerge with thoughts Beyond the Shores.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Write comment. Very impressive expression of unfulfilled desires, Dear Konab. There is something pure which could not be explained in words. Read my ars poetica named, Poetic Sense-1. Thanks.