Emptiness Poem by advija hrustic

Emptiness



It's a dark night
I can feel the coldness
I can feel the darkness
I can feel the loneliness

I would love to feel the world
I would love to feel their pain
I would love to scream with them
I would love to feel their smiles

But I can't feel anything
I can't feel my soul
there is nothing there anymore,
but an empty shell.

Monday, September 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 September 2014

Beautiful..Glory to be The Lord Almighty for such a beautiful thought but in last stanza you have put negative concluding make it positive , never give up hope...birds are never sad, sad they are dead

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Advija Hrustic 27 January 2017

Thank you. I just read this after couple of years, oh what a sad feeling, but I made it, still alive. Thank you.

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