Don'T Die Poem by Sankar Sarkar

Don'T Die

Rating: 4.5


Don’t die
Rather live long
For a bit of love
Under this nice sky!
Here is light and
Here is heaven
Here is hope
In heaps of broken,
Here is belief
In the long breath
Here struggle for life
In the dark lane of death
Here is vast ocean
In pairs of eyes
Before die once dive
And forget all lies and ties.

Live for a bit of smile
Of a stripling and nestling,
And for your freedom
In any shinny morning
Live for your motherland,
Here past and present
Creep together hand in hand
Life and death seem crescent
Live only for yours
And your close ones
Near and far, everywhere
There love touches universe
Don’t die, rather live long
For the soil to enrich your power
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Sunday, March 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 08 March 2015

Sarkar, I loved it. You are forceful and I can understand how passionate you are. Good and inspiring write. Please do keep posting so that we are enthralled. (9)

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Life is precious. And this poem is well inspiring about life and the poet sees the life in its positives of love, light, and smile and everything. This is a valuable poem that I felt to me.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 June 2017

Lovely poem, a good read.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2015

A poem that offers inspiration to the despondent souls to cheer up and live life to the fullest. Appreciate the spirit of the poem. The capital T in the title - 'Don'T Die' may be edited to replace it with a small t. 'Here is hope In heaps of broken' - this expression is grammatically faulty.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 15 August 2015

Great write, Universal love, Unconditional love, Endurance, Selfless, Smiles hiding sorrow Sorrow hiding pain, Loved reading the poem, Added to my poem list

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Raymond Farrell 03 June 2015

This is a moving poem and is admonishing all who read it to take heed and extract the most out of every waking moment they are alive.

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Soumita Sarkar 12 March 2015

a person.....crying to make your live....every moment of life.....

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