Don't Ask Me To Wait Further Poem by Sankar Sarkar

Don't Ask Me To Wait Further

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Neverpromise
You will come again like spring
Never make me hopeful
You will never leave me!
Hope makes life elastic
Again it eats up life
As golden worm turns
The green into yellow;
Promises are like rain drops
In hot summer on desert!

Don't ask me to wait further
Than the realistic time…..
Time is too cruel like desert
To hold countless tears;
Don't ask me to trust moreover
Belief is decaying like moon
Truth is panting like dying heart,
Nothing is secure here
Like Eliot's The Waste Land….
Yet I have to reach there wading
The debris of the dead
Nothing could efface this stink
Even not Arabian aroma!

Sunday, October 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: blank verse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Jarboe 13 October 2019

You're a strong witness to it all. ric

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Kingsley Egbukole 15 October 2019

A very beautiful poem. Love it. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH. Kingsley Egbukole

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 October 2019

most importantly you must read the poem immedately of those who have commented and or sms them thanks but you mustt read more daily to progress in PH POET

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 October 2019

AND this is real poetry but you must explain the background for all to understand your mind Friend what made you select me to comment on your elastically beautiful poems there are so many here I am just a coma Thanks anyway Three of your poems I have read as desired in a row don't forget thanks for the favour hope you will enjoy my poetic flavour

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James Mclain 13 October 2019

Great poem fast paced great read Thank you for this your brilliant insight. James McLain 🎸

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Leeann Azzopardi 13 October 2019

i sense a longing and being disappointed Bravo!

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