Dementia Poem by Elle Smith

Dementia

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Dementia



My head is in muddle,

my words are in a blur.

I see things in the shadows,

but nothing is really there.

I have no concept of time,

or even words I have said.

I don't recognize my children,

which makes me full of dread.

Even worse people don't understand,

the pure confusion I feel.

I know that I am me,

but "ME" at times seems surreal.

I shout instead of talking,

but my volume is at loud.

I used to be respected,

eloquent and even proud.

Each day I seem to worsen,

falling further than in reach.

I am losing my lifeline,

as quickly I reach the deep.


By Elle Smith Copyright 2017

Thursday, June 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,mind,old age ,reflection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 June 2017

An insightful depiction of a medical condition associated with aging, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing ELLE.

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Elle Smith 15 June 2017

I am relieved that I have clearly captured this condition correctly, as that was a real worry for me.

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Rajnish Manga 15 June 2017

Dementia is often related to old age. You have succeeded in portraying the condition quite succinctly. I must thank you for taking up the subject giving it a fair treatment. I quote: I know that I am me /....but ME at times seems surreal.

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Elle Smith 15 June 2017

Thank you as I deliberated as to whether I could express this condition in poetry, without reducing the magnitude of its effects. I hope that it offers understanding to the many who struggle to cope with watching the effects on a loved one..

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