Dear, Pole Star... Poem by Naila Rais

Dear, Pole Star...

Rating: 5.0


Twinkle twinkle burning ball
Tell me the way to you
Faraway from the earth
Sparking in the faraway land.

Pointing north to the traveler
In the desert during nights
Oh! Tell me please I will come to you
With invitation to my birthday party.

Dear, Pole Star...
Thursday, August 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: night,star,traveling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Azhar Ibrahim 26 August 2018

Beautiful Poem, I hope you do find the way to the star!

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Naila Rais 26 August 2018

Oh really! Might be in future as I want to become aeronautical spacecraft designer.... Naila

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Abhipsa Panda 11 October 2018

A nice poem shared by you..beautiful...

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Bipin Churchung Rabha 04 September 2018

This is cool and beautiful.....absolutely stars are helpful, anyway happy birthday Naila 🎂....thank you!

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Naila Rais 05 September 2018

Thnx but my b day is far away from this date.... It is written casually...

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

So nice........You may Invite us also................................

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Naila Rais 03 September 2018

U r alwys invited.... Thnx for encouraging words.... U r me or us...? Naila

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

thnks for th invitation.....................................Waqt ane par dekha jayega....

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 September 2018

A short and sweet poem on north star that remains fixed and shows way to the traveler. Thanks for sharing Naila.

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 August 2018

Hi Naila Nice poem on one’s fantasies and dreams... And unwittingly, are you looking for direction? Asking for guidance?

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