Being With You Poem by Ramotlhaba Chrisjan

Being With You

Rating: 5.0


If being with you worth blood
I'm ready to fight
If being with you worth a marathon
I'm prepared to take on Caster Semenya
If being with you worth a team work
Count me in
If being with you worth nothing
I'm willing to give everything

But then... If being with you worth dying for
I will never be with you

Friday, August 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The story is about the girl I used to love. Actually the one I was in a relationship with. I took too much effort just to be with her, I ended up getting hurt physically.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 16 September 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Ramotlhaba. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 August 2018

But then... If being with you worth dying for I will never be with you..love and at the end.... getting hurt physically............. very nice poem with proper examples.. thank u dear poet. tony

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