Being Loved Poem by Patricia Christie

Being Loved

Rating: 4.5


I am tired
Tired of playing tough
Tired of being the rock
Tired of keeping my guard up
Tired of acting like everything is O.K.

I am drained
Physically drained from all the pressures of life
Mentally drained from the 10years of school
Emotionally drained from the hurt of being rejected, disrespected and losing the ones I love
Spiritually drained because i am too far away from the Creator

I am loved
Loved by my family
Loved by my future spouse... Whomever I'll be blessed with
Loved by the few friends i have
Loved by the most high
Was Loved by the one i lost

Being loved is my motivation
Being loved out weighs all the negative
Being loved keeps me going on
Being loved makes the future seems so much brighter

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
felt inspired to write what was on my mind, this one is dedicated to my loved ones
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 25 April 2014

A loving being like you can only attract love! Jump in its river and swim!

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Khairul Ahsan 14 January 2019

Thanks for sharing this motivational poem, dear poetess. 'Being loved' is also my motivation and so the last stanza of the poem touched me deep.

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Darlene Walsh 26 April 2014

Love does outweigh all problems. We can survive without love but we can't really live without love. I was tired and drained and much worse, but now I am loved and it has made everything good.

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Susan Lacovara 25 April 2014

Love, above all other things, gives us the strength to believe that we are indeed on the right path. Most importantly, love with honesty...When loving others and yourself...tell what truth your heart speaks..be brave, be kind, be loving. A welcomed reminder, your write. PEACE

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Colleen Courtney 25 April 2014

Being loved is a wonderful feeling! I really like this heartfelt poem but I'm thinking in the last line of the second verse you meant to write Creator instead of Creature? This has happened to me also with certain words! Please don't take offense at my correction. Just want your poem to be as great as it can be! It really is a great write!

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Gajanan Mishra 25 April 2014

My love keeps me going on, very true, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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