A Fistful Of Sand Poem by Bharati Nayak

'I am just a fistful of sand Loaded on the truck And transported To build A house.' interesting, might take more than a fist full of sand to build a house, even to fill a sandpit, but actually a beautiful metaphor in the context of the poem

Your writing makes me feel how insignificant I am in the very large universe. TFS

A very precise poem loaded with powerful images..I loved the way such a very nice poem has been penned.. regards

Thanks to all the readers who have added their valuable opinions on my poem.

What a thoughtful and meaningful write...wonderful Bharati...thanks for sharing this poem here..also thank you very much your kind comment on my poem too-10

Nature! With the open arms of love. Nice work.

A powerful poem that penetrate the psyche of all of us who from time to time feel so small and insignificant in this vast universe. Yet every grain of sand help to make up the vast sea shore as every drop of water contributes to the vast ocean. Well done my friend!