A Music Is Made Poem by Bharati Nayak

A Music Is Made

Rating: 4.8


What and how
Can I define
And give a meaning
When I look
To the soft sunshine
That illuminates
My inner and outer world
How can I give a name
when music is made
When sweet breeze
Caresses the green branch
Or when
Flowers dance
In the rhythm
And the birds chirp

In which note
This music is played
When in silence
It is heard
From thousand miles apart.
In which name
I shall call the cloud
That wanders into the desert
Drizzles for a traveller wearied.

What name shall I call the drizzle
That frees the music
Held captive in the dungeon
And give a chance to play again
In the freedom
Where sunshine,
moon beam
Birds and butterflies
Even the tiniest life dance.

A Music Is Made
Tuesday, November 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: music,nature,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 01 November 2016

Beautiful and enchanting, it so nice to read over and over again, Love conveyed in nature and music..truly it is only with the heart that one can see and write love in its purity. To quote this music is played, when in silence, it is heard, from thousand miles apart absolutely sweet.

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Bharati Nayak 03 November 2016

Thank you for your appreciation.Yes, love is the most natural feeling and music conveys love in silence.

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Rajnish Manga 01 November 2016

Only a poet of exceptional caliber can feel and make others feel the beauty and bounties of nature all around us which are otherwise beyond the grasp of our senses. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem which is now part of the list of my favourite poems. I would like to quote a few lines though the entire poem is a masterpiece. To the soft sunshine / That illuminates My inner and outer world / How can I give a name

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Bharati Nayak 03 November 2016

Thank you for your wonderful comment.Yes, nature abounds in beauty and we can feel it when we are one with nature.

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Sushil Soni 27 July 2017

A very powerful poem. The imagery is fascinating as well as strong. And so is the flow.

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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2023

Amazing eloquence and emotions artistically wedded together for great impact. A beautiful creation.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2023

I like how this beautiful poem was crafted and presented. A tinge of innocence is embedded in every stanza yet there is that cleverness hidden in the wonderful poetic expressions.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 11 February 2023

the poetic music is framed in the sunshine globe to combine the segacious poetic genre and scion; great to read your poetic writings and thoughts; congrats for being selected poem as POD

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Savita Tyagi 11 February 2023

Beautiful poem. congratulations. So happy to see it as member poem and have a chance to read it again.

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Anjandev Roy 11 February 2023

Wonderful piece.......well deserved POD.....thank u.....

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