You Are The Poem I Write Poem by drich suarez

You Are The Poem I Write

Rating: 5.0


Had the stars left the sky?
If not what's in her eyes?
Something that glitters day and night
Heavenly gift from you
Now it is mine.

Had my heart refused to beat?
Why myself numbs from head down to my feet?
A strange feeling that a man could only feel
in his one in a million dream

Had my friends started to lie?
Why every now and then they hide?
They disappear just in time you're around
Conspiracy! I presupposed but i like

Every detail marks
That is why i want you to know
you are the poem I write

Friday, March 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: affection,art,happiness,happy,love,romance,you
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I love Noralyn!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 02 March 2018

Nice poem on love and longing for the beloved.

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C F 13 July 2019

Very nicely done, your images and phrasings are extremely good, love this poem.10+

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Naila Rais 10 June 2018

A nice write... Keep it up.... Thnx for sharing.. Naila

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2018

Every detail marks That is why i want you to know you are the poem I write.love and affection........happiness, longing for the beloved. thank you dear poet.. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 March 2018

Drich, such a great poem...10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2018

They disappear just in time you're around. Every detail is marked amazingly. Life realizes importance of love and happiness. Friendship matters a lot. This poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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