You Are A Masterpiece Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

before i read, is this going to be about ME? ? ? now i'm reading. ok, this time i'm sure breath (it should be breathe) is not a typo. i know you shall correct this. right? RIGHT! ! ! ? HA ha. i would not put a comma after heart. i would, however, use more punctuation, but it is not 'necessary'. OK! ! ! I WAS correct in guessing you'd write about me aka Bri! ! ! THANKS. it is A VERY fine poem. to MyPoemList. bri :) [did i say thanks? ]