You And Me Poem by Antonio Williams

You And Me

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you looked at me and you saw a future,
a beautiful life of joy and wonder.
i looked at you and i saw torture,
greamy evenings with words of murder.
you looked at me and it felt good.

i looked at you on a winter night,
and i saw an incomprehensible fright,
you looked and touched my sight,
which did feel so right.

you looked at me and you saw my fears
and i knocked at your opened door,
and you welcomed a restless soul,
i looked at you and i saw your worth.

forever till eternity; you said,
together till the end of time; i did
we looked and saw our future.
we looked, and that felt so right

Monday, January 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 03 July 2017

I saw torture- you saw my fears: only shy lovers can understand.very nice.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2017

Forever! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Antonio Williams 03 July 2017

Thank you

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Antonio Williams 28 March 2016

Thanks Dr. tony Brahmin for your time to read my poems and for your comment!

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2016

you looked at me and you saw my fears and i knocked at your opened door, and you welcomed a restless soul, i looked at you and i saw your worth.- - fear, acceptance, sense of worth. so many points in this beautiful poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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