Y..... The Biggest Freedom Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y..... The Biggest Freedom

Rating: 4.5


I pray for love
We are all bathing in it
We just have to open our hearts,
to open our minds
And let it in

The biggest freedom is ours
To let it in or lock it out

I pray for hope
We are swimming in it
We just have to open our hearts
to open our souls
And let it in

The biggest freedom is ours
To let it in or lock it out

I pray for wisdom,
We are soaking in it
We just have to open
To open our minds
And let it in

The biggest freedom is ours
To let it in or lock it out

I pray for spirit
We are swimming in it
Let's allow our selves
to drown in the huge love
the huge wisdom and spirit
that is around us all time

Aufie Zophy, Bachok

Friday, August 31, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,love,peace,spirit,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 August 2012

This is obviously great. the meaning is clear and enjoyable, Totally fantastic and nice. good job dear.

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Joseph Anderson 02 September 2012

Wise and sage advice, Written with emotional empact. There is much to think on here. Indeed, a worthwhile write

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Rekha Mandagere 01 October 2012

If we are free from locking our souls within then surely it leads us to the great path of wisdom. i love the clarity and the presentation technique used here. I must give a 10

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Eindaray Kyaw 15 September 2012

a wave of satisfaction comes over my mind while I am reading this poem The biggest freedom...really great!

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Valerie Dohren 31 August 2012

Fabulous write Aufie, so much wisdom here.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2016

A great poem, its message is universal, its style is amazing and it has so many beautiful lines.

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Chinedu Dike 23 September 2014

Indeed, it is within our discretion to chose bliss or not. A poem with a powerful message. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Dea Dear 03 May 2014

i have a notice writing here hoping it could be useful, , , this line, , , , i pray for spirit it must has been so i pray for my creator because praying must be only for him

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Elena Sandu 19 October 2012

Your poem brilliantly shines, yes everything is around us we only need to keep hearts open, how true! Thank you, wish I could give a hundred tens, great poem, I should have it on my faves, thank you for share.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 October 2012

Such a wise poem swimmin in super allegory itself dat i vote for it high.

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