My Son Poem by Aufie Zophy

My Son

Rating: 2.4


My son, I can see so many good things in you
And here I am really honest and true.
My son, I love it when your caring heart opens wide
When I had a headache you came and sat by my side

My son, some of your talents for drawing, I have seen
You are really good at it, believe me, fantastic, I mean
My son, there are really so many good things in you.
Even so far, I have mentioned just two

My son, you have a talent for language, you do
Yes learning a language is easy for you
My son, Here’s number three, there is so much more
So much more in you, I truly adore

My son, I do understand that being 14 is quite challenging
There are so many things changing
But please my very lovely son,
Keep on bringing out the good that’s in you, please keep on.

Your loving father, Papa


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 01 September 2013

An adorable write! The message it gives, supercedes its poetic beauty! Each parent should be able to count one by one and speak aloud before their children their strengths!

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Charity Nduhiu 23 July 2015

Wow what a loving father you are! ! ! Keep blessing your son. I have really liked the poem Aufie

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Ruby Honeytip 07 July 2013

Reinforcing the good is never wrong [3 Even better when it comes from the heart. Lovely words.....love Roobs x

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Owain Glyn 17 December 2012

Could love be any greater? Good for you!

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Wahab Abdul 24 May 2013

really a good take for your son.. i had a son of 7 years.. i love him very much as you love yrs.. love the poem..

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Laura Cairella 16 May 2022

My own son is turning 14 and he is excatly as you describe yours, and I feel exactly as you do towards him. Thanks for expressing so sweetly feelings so deep.

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Wonderful father of a wonderful son. Loved it.

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Bharati Nayak 22 January 2022

My son, I do understand that being 14 is quite challenging There are so many things changing But please my very lovely son, Keep on bringing out the good that's in you, please keep on.

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Bharati Nayak 22 January 2022

Such a beautiful and touching write.Very inspiring.

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A B Faniki 02 September 2019

What a beauty it is to a father a to see beauty in ur kids. Dear poet u have painted a greate image

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