God took more time
to create a woman.
She has to shoulder more burdens
for continuation of species than man.
A woman
is a daughter,
a sister,
a wife,
a daughter in law,
a mother and the first teacher
for her children.
Even as a wife her role is varied;
serves her husband like
a mother in the morning,
loves him like a sister in the day and
pleases him like a call girl in the night.
She has to heal herself when unwell,
attends to sickness of all.
Performs all her chores to keep everyone okay,
capable of working eighteen hours a day.
Her hug must have the ability
to heal any thing from a bruised
knee to a broken heart.
Tries to support and balance both sides
(father's and in law's)
for their comfort.
She is an example of extreme tenderness;
she is charming, charismatic
but forbearing and confident at the same time.
Soft inside and out side like seedless grape.
Her eyes are ocean of tears
for expressing sorrow, doubts, love,
loneliness, suffering and happiness.
Her sacrificial life,
physical possessions can amaze a male,
her love is unconditional.
God thought He created a woman
full of perfection,
a diamond of the first water and
selfless service contributor,
but found that she has one drawback
'She often forgets her value of
being invaluable to society and man'.
WOW! What a greatest honesty about WOMAN, incredible poem of your personal thought, dear Dr. Dash,5 Stars TOP deserving
My deepest gratitude to u Mam for your inspiring attitude.This is no exaggeration, but my feelings only.Thanks.
A beautiful tribute to the most beautiful n compassionate creation of God
"Woman, charismatic, enduring, invaluable." Great tribute to God and to women! 5*****
A crafty poem Dr Dash. I liked the way you wrote it. Full *****
A Woman can do no wrong in your mind, heart and soul, she makes a man's life constantly whole, WOW! I have read time and again this amazing incredible poem, I am walking in pink clouds now. Thank YOU, Dr. Dash!
I am fortunate that I could make u euphoric.your first two lines in your comment make a nice short poem for me.Thanks Mam.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You make a woman shines in this magnificent poem! Thank you, thank you, Sir.
My sincere gratitude to u Mam for your constant encouragement.I happily express that I did not make any woman shine.Truly speaking the attributes they possess make them shine despite some draw backs we all human being possess.