Within Poem by Adiela Akoo

Within

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Dare I awaken dreams
Long forgotten,
Dare I even touch? !

Dare I say words
Long comatose,
Dare I erupt? !

Dare I resuscitate
Asleep within,
The Bard I used to love? !

Tuesday, November 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: awakening,emotions,love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To be or not to be? That was the question behind this particular poem. After life has done what life does to you, do you dare to still look at those dreams that have been laying dormant deep within?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 25 November 2018

Dare I awaken dreams Long forgotten, Dare I even touch? ! Dare I say words Long comatose, Dare I erupt? ! - - - - - - In the life's journey we have many dreams.Some dreams we realize, some dreams remain dormant and we feel dissatisfied for those lost dreams.Should we touch those dreams long forgotten? A lovely poem on this 'perennial question'.

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O POET ME POET 12 April 2019

nice knowing such an accomplished poet all the bestest but still do read MOM'S SMILES WILL YE POETESS

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Adiela Akoo 16 June 2019

Thank you. I have read and commented on your lovely poem on 4/12/2019

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 February 2019

THIS IS MY MAIDEN READ YOU HAVE NOT composed many poetry but do read my good one MOMS SMILES U WILL LIKE

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 December 2018

Awakening dreams, dare I erupt.... dare I even touch...... lovely expressions of deep love. thanku dear poetess for this poem. tony

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Adiela Akoo 12 April 2019

Thank you so much Tony

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Butch Decatoria 28 November 2018

To be or not to be? —the answer is TO BE, always to be.... exist. Thank you for taking the time to read my crap, lol. Namaste.

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Adiela Akoo 28 November 2018

Yes, most certainly! To BE! ! ! It was my pleasure :)

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donnie wolff 28 November 2018

you always look for those dreams. its near impossible to give up. though we try. very well written.

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Adiela Akoo 28 November 2018

Thank you, Donnie

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