Where Do Broken Dreams Go? Poem by Falana Zion

Where Do Broken Dreams Go?

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I'm lost without the hope of being found
I'm swallowed by a river of thoughts
I'm broken beyond repair
My mind is giving up to the soul
Where do broken dreams go?

Come ye the brainy souls
Come to feed my thirsty soul
I'm lost in the world unknown
I'm sitting on my indefatigable throne
Where really do broken dreams go?

Where do broken dreams go?
Are they lost in Hades or the world unknown
Are they lost in the sky or hidden in the stars
Tell me they've gone to rest a night,
For them to come back alive

Where do broken dreams go
They can't be burried in the ground, I know
Or mixed with the river and flow
For they are more than the space of earth alone


Where do broken dreams go?
I think they back out like an army on retreat
To sit comfortably on their throne
Since the dreamer is long gone and lost
I hope I'm not wrong or cheated by thoughts

Monday, August 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dare Onadele 12 August 2019

Nice poem. I enjoyed every line of hit. Truly one needs to ask where the dreams go. But I'm sure if one keeps persisting, they would come alive from wherever they are.

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Julia Luber 09 August 2019

I think your broken dreams go into your indefatigable throne. This is a strong and convincing poem, filled with questions that the reader can engage in answering.

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Bharati Nayak 09 August 2019

Let me quote another stanza from this lovely poem- - Where do broken dreams go They can't be burried in the ground, I know Or mixed with the river and flow For they are more than the space of earth alone

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Bharati Nayak 09 August 2019

Where do broken dreams go? Are they lost in Hades or the world unknown Are they lost in the sky or hidden in the stars Tell me they've gone to rest a night, For them to come back alive - - - - - -A wonderful poem that rhymes in my heart- - - - -A broken dream that haunts - - - -But you are positive that it will come back to rule again.

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Falana Zion

Falana Zion

Ekiti State, Nigeria
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