When You Thought... Poem by Naila Rais
When You Thought...
When you thought, he will be your dear
Who will be your brimming light
The one who will take you to height
The one who will fly away all your fear
When you thought of he, all is pain that you bear
Who never wanna stand by your side
The one who wants you to slide
The one who never wanna hear
You get worse, worse in you, worse for life and silent for more...
You wanna care for yourself
You wanna care for him
You just count scattered pieces of your love...
You wanna care for yourself You wanna care for him You just count scattered pieces of your love. pain in love. sufferings.... counting the pieced of the love... very fine and emotional poem dear poetess. tony
This is the feeling of sad end to a true love. Very nicely crafted. Seeped in emotion it flows very nice. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/20/2024 4:18:14 PM # 1.0.0.1119
can I suggest something if you don't mind it may improve the output of poetry beyond limits but many mind so I daren't do
Yah! Why not? Improvements are always welcomed...