When Poem by tanya gupta

When

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when you believe in someone,
don't let them take your beliefs along with them.
when you follow a path along with them,
don't let them make your path dirty.
when you trust them,
don't let them abolish god's trust in you.
when you have faith in them,
don't let them make you faithless.
when you do all good things for their goodness,
don't let them ignore your deeds.
and when you love them,
don't let them make you lonely.

Saturday, March 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 03 March 2014

So true, expressed wirh wisdom and understanding, we have to remain true to ourselves even in a relationship! Lovely write!

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V P Mahur 03 March 2014

Dear Tanya I happen to come to your page again and again for i love reading your poems they are always full of heart I have some more new poems just go through them and tell me something Thanks

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Utsav Patel 04 March 2014

Nice write tanya.. Wish it could.be.little bit polished with rhymeing.. But I never liked rhymeing! ! ! Keep writing tanya..and I will be there for any kind of help.. :)

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Md Asadullah 02 March 2014

Nice message you've given in this poem, I like this poem :)

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Tanya Gupta 09 March 2014

thankyou all for giving me your valuable time and comments...each comment mean a lot to me........thankyou so much

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Sandra Feldman 14 December 2014

Your words echo in the hearts of those with sentiment and that understand that life is not just material wealth. As a promising poet you have made this clear.

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Prabal Dev 12 May 2014

Well penned. Really good. We are responsible for safeguarding our treasures.

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Hazel Durham 05 May 2014

So true, we cannot hand over our own power to someone else, I love this beautiful and insightful write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 April 2014

Beautiful poem with a deep thought. Very beautiful message you are telling through a poem. Compromise, but not on your goodness. Never anyone fool you or take undue advantage if you....very positive message. Loved it.

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C. P. Sharma 24 April 2014

It carries a message about making friends, make compromises but don't compromise goodness. A nicely penned poem.

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