what happens to a friendship?
when at first it's like a treasure
but then everything seems so cold
time erases the wishes of future
what happens to promises?
kept in heart? or forgotten?
were they built to break apart?
is it the rule of people's heart?
i don't ask anyone to stay
i don't force anyone to go
but i'm confused when i look back
what's happening? ...i don't know...
@Steven, Thank you for appreciating my comment. I would like to have yours on some of my poems too.
The questions that you have raised in your poem have indeed plagued many hearts before yours, and the answer to your note is yet unknown. i don't ask anyone to stay i don't force anyone to go but i'm confused when i look back what's happening? ...i don't know... - Truly enigmatic! A nice poem, well done!
@Cassandra Jasmine, No matter who ceases the communication, the friendship continues if it is true friendship.
I really agree with this perfect nice piece of work. This truly nice man...i really enjoy it. we, sometimes are kept in such situations that don't know how to act and we get angry so soon...but most of us in fact, don't know lots of things won't never comeback again.... nicely done bro.
this is written well indeed. but it will put the reader in a doubt that what kind of friendship was this and where it was heading? as you have written what's happening? what is happened to friendship? or your friendship? or what? perfetto Matino. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow, this was beautiful! Sometimes, I, too, wonder about promises, whether they are remembered or forgotten, and what happens to a friendship when communication ceases. I'm giving this a 10, and adding this to my Favorites List. :)