jana ghossein

Time Out (Simile, Metaphor, Alleteration Poem)

Help how much my heart hurts
my mouth is as dry as a desert
my throught is sore
my voice is a goner
my heart is beating as fast as a tiger
my hand is a rattling snake
my face is a tomato
bye bye, boring life
i cannot take it no more
i lay my head
upon my knee
now blow the whistle refree

Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 19, 2011

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  • Bob Ross (11/3/2019 5:09:00 PM)

    Happy Trees, Happy Thoughts, Har, Har, Har

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  • Bob Ross (11/3/2019 5:07:00 PM)

    Happy Trees, Happy Thoughts

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  • The criminal boys (5/7/2019 9:38:00 PM)

    Im robbing a bank oh wait the popo are here oh no🙃

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  • Skyler (12/2/2018 10:33:00 AM)

    what year did this poem come out

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    Oooop(5/7/2019 9:40:00 PM)

    Glob dober
    Pooo

    Crim boys(5/7/2019 9:36:00 PM)

    Noooo not the popo i hate th policeee😫🔫🏴‍☠️

    Crim boys(5/7/2019 9:35:00 PM)

    Noooo not the popo i hate th policeee😫🔫🏴‍☠️

    The pooolice boys(5/7/2019 9:33:00 PM)

    Wooop wooop wwoooooop wooop the popo are here, ! Wooop woop🚔🚓🚔🕋💵💴💎nooooo

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  • courtney (11/27/2018 6:39:00 PM)

    What is the form of poetry. Haiku?

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  • basilde (5/12/2018 1:47:00 PM)

    Wat is the poem about exactly

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    GUD VIBEZZZZZ(4/29/2020 2:28:00 PM)

    It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

    GUD VIBEZZZZZ(4/29/2020 2:28:00 PM)

    It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

    GUD VIBEZZZZZ(4/29/2020 2:28:00 PM)

    It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

    GUD VIBEZZZZZ(4/29/2020 2:28:00 PM)

    It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

    GUD VIBEZZZZZ(4/29/2020 2:28:00 PM)

    It’s about the person wanting to commit suicide because she cant take it no more😕

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  • Bianca S (3/12/2018 1:17:00 PM)

    this poem is a little sad: (

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  • I''m just a guy (2/6/2018 9:17:00 AM)

    i don't understand........

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  • James Fischer (2/2/2017 2:39:00 PM)

    weiner weiner weiner weiner weiner weiner weeeeeeeiner

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  • Dawood Muzaffer (11/26/2016 12:11:00 AM)

    i could barely imagine it but i could really tell that it has really poem like words

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  • Adi Cox (4/2/2011 5:34:00 AM)

    I like this poem. I am trying to put all the imagary in the peom together and I am getting a football match between animals in the desert using a tomato as a football. Are you the personification of this?

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  • Adi Cox (4/2/2011 5:32:00 AM)

    I like this poem. I am trying to put all the imagary in the peom together and I am getting a football match between animals in the desert using a tomato as a football. Are you the personification of this?

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