Thoughts Poem by Jabulani Mzinyathi

Thoughts

Rating: 4.5


thought we were in it together
thought we were our own liberators
thought you were driven by altruism
did not know of latent mercenary tendencies

thought the birds would freely twitter
thought there would be a relay race
thought of the free market of ideas
did not know this would be a discordant voice

thought there would be lots of bliss
thought the law would achieve justice
thought there would be no stinking opulence
did not know i was wide off the mark

Thoughts
Sunday, May 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
marcus mosiah garvey says ' justice is greater than the law'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Qiniso Mogale 21 May 2017

thought we were our own liberators... did not know I was wide off the mark. Brilliant poem Jabulani. Keep writing

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thanks for the encouragement. i vow to keep on till my last breath

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 May 2017

But there is little justice. Thanks

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