The Secret Path Haiku Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The Secret Path Haiku

Rating: 5.0


On the path, I walk
As I found him laying there
Another life has gone

Tuesday, May 30, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: child abuse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 30 May 2023

Awesome, Nicely written.

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M. Asim Nehal 30 May 2023

Frequently, we witness the mistreatment of a child, yet we rarely take action to rectify the circumstance. The insufficiency of knowledge and the psychological condition of caregivers and those in the vicinity exacerbate the suffering. A contemplative Haiku.5****

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Indira Renganathan 03 June 2023

Philosophical yet funny too...good haiku

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Richard Wlodarski 31 May 2023

2) of this AMAZING haiku!

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Richard Wlodarski 31 May 2023

LeeAnn, Gord Downie would be very proud of your creation! In a mere 15 words, you have so profoundly summed up a project that was so very precious to him. I am totally in awe of this

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Varsha M 31 May 2023

Very true sir.

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Anjandev Roy 30 May 2023

Brilliant haiku.......thanks for sharing.... dear poetess...

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