The Scare Crow Poem by Alexander Onoja

The Scare Crow

Rating: 4.5


To him who strolled round ancient gates,
in darkness, sun or rain he waits.
Standing with ambition ready to serve,
with his ever ready phrase to calm his nerve.
'All is well' he'd say,
and the locusts and birds hid away,
as he stands guard every night and day.

He'd stood fighting the cobwebs of sleep,
daring the locusts and mocking birds.
Watching the gate he'd swore to keep,
while we snore on our rocking beds.

One night, the locusts and birds attacked,
and he fell to the ground within hours of impact.
We heard him scream
'All..... Well'
'is' or 'isn't' none could tell.
Our bodies deaf to his cries,
he kicked, blinked, and then closed his eyes,
the dark sky crimson as he dies.

The giant gate lay broken,
with motes of dust littered on it.
There was whispered gossips, but none spoken,
of quintessence, of goodness, and of wit

'All is well' although he's dead,
'All is well' with all done and said.

Wednesday, April 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 15 April 2015

Wonderful poem, Alexander. It would make an interesting movie

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 15 April 2015

Thanks a lot Kelly, but movie? I'll tell Steven Speilberg about it. And you are right Dilantha, in life we've got so many scare crows and a lot of people neglect them. Thanks guys, pls read THE PHOENIX STRANGLER by Chinedu Dike.

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Aashisha Chakraborty 28 May 2015

That is a wonderful metaphor. Profound work I must say!

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 05 September 2016

Hey! Thanks Aashisha

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 01 June 2017

Thanks Tony, We need to appreciate the unsung hero.

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Babs-anthony Tamilore 17 May 2017

A being that is not appreciated for his sacrifice, he dies for ingrates. Nice presentation of character, a dense and thought provoking piece, well done.

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 03 March 2017

Thanks a lot Mohammed.... Your kind words are really appreciated.

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 03 March 2017

Thanks a lot Mohammed.... Your kind words are really appreciated.

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2016

Lifeless yet scaring the ones with life.....Nice flow, use of metaphor is perfect, a poem with profound message. Thanks for sharing.10+++

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Alexander Egbe Onoja 01 December 2016

THANKS A LOT MOHAMMED

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