The Lone Bird Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
The Lone Bird
I watch this lone bird
down the sky
hesitant to fly
folded wings, drawn in,
self-denied
What does it carry that heavy,
that persuades,
not allowing it to raise a wish
inside to rise and try?
An unattractive sky?
A mind, perhaps,
that reminisces that reaffirms
to fall prey, not
further again
Loved the theme and the way this beautiful poem is written. Top score
Bravo Kersav I can see why you deserve a published book TFS
Pity that girl..you have captured her mental state very well..last stanza is the highlight...kudos Kesav
A very thoughtful poem! .. So beautifully expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
With that image of a lonely girl and the free birds around her, the poem clearly expresses the deep seated fear in the mind of the girl to step outside where there are plenty of preying birds waiting to take chance. She is weighed down and down by fear!
A very discerning and powerful poem. Brilliant thoughts that provoke the mind woven in a beautiful poem. Top marks!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/29/2024 11:39:22 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A philosophical ink. Beautifully composed. Thanks.