The Helpless Poem by Indira Renganathan

The Helpless

Rating: 5.0


That one-legged crow
Comes for his routine morsel
Right on time
Day by day
My empathy rises
For his missing other leg

Today
He is now here
On his tiny platform
I am in close
Watching

His one leg
Is restlessly shaky
My empathy rises
For his difficulty in standing

I ask 'is it painful? '

With no answer
He throws a
Look sideways and flies away
He has two wings

I return to my respite
Limping with a stick
I have no wings

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 09 February 2023

A meaningful write. Very nicely crafted. Thanks.

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Rob Lamberton 11 February 2023

While you lack the wings of a crow you take to the sky with your intellect and ability to lift others with your words!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2023

Sometimes the subject of our compassion is in a better position than we are. What a clever write, Indira. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2023

A beautiful and meaningful poem so brilliantly crafted and narrated.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 10 February 2023

Nice observational poem on Compassion

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 10 February 2023

As per Indian philosophy, birds are of a higher genus than humans. Nice observational poem on

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