The Greatest Loss Poem by David Wood

The Greatest Loss

Rating: 5.0


The day casts a long shadow,
Time passes all too slowly.
Scratches on the door, paw prints

Still visible to a bleary eye with the
Occasional fur caught on the leg
Of a chair. Her DNA is in every

Room, her presence lives, her collar
Her lead, her bowl still full with water
Sitting in the kitchen alongside her

Favourite treat. Yes, the days cast
A long shadow. The emptiness so
Profound, the loneliness

Complete.

Sunday, February 21, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 21 February 2021

Your well expressed poem evokes sympathy for the great hole left in a life by the loss of a beloved pet.

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Captain Cur 21 February 2021

Even though they are physically not there, the memories of the joy they brought can never be taken away. Nothing more faithful or loyal than a loving pet.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 February 2021

David, I really love this poem because it has touched my soul Bravo!

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Kostas Lagos 22 February 2021

Loss of a dog, of a pet in general. is really painful. Great poem

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Aufie Zophy 11 March 2021

Very well written poem. A tear in my eye.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 25 February 2021

beautifully crafted... that's I enjoyed; thanks for sharing this

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 February 2021

Loss of a pet is unbearable. A poem that touches your heart....5 stars for this poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 February 2021

A very touching poem. It resonates with me. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery.

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me poet yeps poet 22 February 2021

HIGH DAVE NICE ONE THIS IS

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