The Golden Eve Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Golden Eve

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Time that came out after explosion of an old nebula
And diverged moving beauty all-round the vacant space
In a weak moment of love scattered all its charming wealth
But it burst in tears by losing a gorgeous grace.

The clever agent of time introduced her with him and left
All other on the instincts bestowed upon them by the creator
The ancient existence what else it may be other than love
Love that is neither a viewer nor a listener, not even an orator,

The only language it knows is the language of a silent touch
And the touch did what was planned after a prejudiced thought.
Time is mighty and greedy since then it's engaged in attempts
To bring the portrait back, no wonder, she is portrait of art!

Time attacks her beauty and spreads molten silver on the silk
In stages it brings the decays for a back journey to the fires
It forgets she is going back there with the memories of touches
She will sleep there with the dreams of regaining desires

The golden Eve is favored with love for her beautiful heart
She can capture the Rome of time as she is made of gold,
She can defeat the aging by Mona Lisa's smile on the lips
She is Cleopatra born once again and will never grow old.

The Golden Eve
Monday, November 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lady
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 November 2018

What a marvelous poem. A timeless lady and beauty nurtured by love. Liked the picture of your beautiful lady. So very true, she can defeat aging by her Mona Lisa smile. I concur with Kellys Kurt's great comment. Beautifully crafted write.

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Bharati Nayak 19 November 2018

The golden Eve is favored with love for her beautiful heart She can capture the Rome of time as she is made of gold, She can defeat the aging by Mona Lisa's smile on the lips She is Cleopatra born once again and will never grow old. - - - - - - Timelessness of beauty captured in the poem- - - Love never grows old. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem- - -Charm and grace scattered from the beautiful lady.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 November 2018

The last two lines of the last stanza speak volumes! A lovely poem... beautifully penned....10

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Kelly Kurt 19 November 2018

Her beauty shines from her smile and through your words of love and admiration.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 November 2018

The golden Eve is favored with love for her beautiful heart She can capture the Rome of time as she is made of gold, She can defeat the aging by Mona Lisa's smile on the lips She is Cleopatra born once again and will never grow old.........touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem on Eve so nicely executed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 September 2022

Portrait of art... great

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Valsa George 21 November 2018

She can defeat the aging by Mona Lisa's smile on the lips She is Cleopatra born once again and will never grow old....................................... I do perfectly agree with you! A beautiful write and a great tribute to your soulmate!

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2018

Time will throw its dust on age yet the smile on face can change everything, A fantastic poem on lady love, Almighty is ever kind to all of us & blessed with some creations that stands apart, I suppose she is your better-half. Fantastic poem Janab.

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Muzahidul Reza 20 November 2018

At The Golden Eve you have done well dear poet presenting a love poem. thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Khalid Saifullah 19 November 2018

Beauty, beauty, a thing of beauty............

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