The Brokenness Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

The Brokenness

Rating: 5.0


Though I am broken
My heart never ceased
To look beyond
The brokenness.

© Aarzoo Mehek

The Brokenness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 January 2023

Loveliest worded for the sad heart and the broken life.Very heart touching and full melancholy. Myriad stars worth, I will cacth them for you, dear poetess. There is some positiveness in this very sad poem. Brilliantly presented.

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 January 2023

Thank you so much for all the love. Nice to be back again among my poet froends 🙂

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 January 2023

Thank you so much for such precious words means a lot. Thank you for reading Sylvia.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2023

A wonderful poem. I am so happy to read your new poem after such a long gap. Keep writing. Happy new year 2023

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The broken shards of life! But we need to look beyond them and tread past them..

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 January 2023

This is how life is. We tend to look beyond the brokenness. There is always a ray of hope. Top marks & to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 January 2023

Marvellous Poem Aarzoo. Happy New Year dear Poetess. Glad to see your poem today.

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M. Asim Nehal 18 January 2023

And that is what life is all about. Like jigsaw we try to collect pieces to solve the puzzle. Fantastic poem, shot and terse. Welcome back Aarzoo ji

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 January 2023

We recollect the past though that is broken! ~

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 January 2023

Can't escape na.🙂

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