Bliss! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Bliss!

Rating: 4.9


Wandering in the the valley of love
Listening to the rustling of autumn leaves
Absorbing the occult dewdrops of solitude
Singing along with the birds
Hearkening to whispers of the deep woods
Dancing to the psychedelic tunes of love
In a wave of ecstasy, i am lost
Lost in His loving intimacy
Sinking myself in the spiritual happiness
Appeased by His love
Experiencing marvels on my way
Feeling the bliss of Paradise here on Earth
I attain salvation from these worldly affairs.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Bliss!
Saturday, December 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,salvation,solitude,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 30 April 2016

And how did I missed this Bliss? A wonderful poem with great imagery, fine flow and spiritual touch. No less than 10+++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 December 2015

A n excellent hymn full of rhyme and earnest desire to attain spiritual happiness by devotion of the Almighty God. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 December 2015

Thank you so much for appreciating my work. It has encouraged me to share my poems.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2015

In a wave of ecstasy, i am lost Lost in His loving intimacy Sinking myself in the spiritual happiness Appeased by His love.. Such a spiritual turn from nature. You begin with a peaceful meditation and conversing with the nature only to land in the paradise..... a wonderful spiritual poem. thank you very much. you are a gifted poetess. thank you. tony

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 December 2015

Appreciate your time and valuable feedback... it means a lot. Thanks once again for joining me in this journey of poetry

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 January 2023

Lost in His loving intimacy/sinking myself in the spiritual happiness...your readers can just feel but can't measure the depth of your happiness! One more thing I must convey you that one of your poems is reflected among top 100 member poems. You deserve it. Many congratulations!

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Rob Lamberton 18 January 2023

"Wandering in the the valley of love…Feeling the bliss of Paradise here on Earth" excellent! !

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

A five star worthy poem_ do keep you the good work. Your poems are amazing _ do consider reading a few of my poems as well like 'Euphoria' and 'Brother in Arms'

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2021

A wonderful poem dear poetess Aarzoo! Stay blessed... merry Christmas!

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Mustafa Test 20 December 2021

Perfecto

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