The Blue Dot Poem by Kevin Patrick

The Blue Dot

Rating: 5.0


We fight and annihilate
for sole proprietorship
to be a big shot for the speck of a spot

...floating somewhere on oblivions wave


from our industries of slaughter
all civilisations have chartered
to win their grand plots for this tiny blue dot

...marooned in the still life of the universes grave

The Blue Dot
Thursday, March 10, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: war,existence,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 March 2022

Mr. Patrick you are ahead by a century Bravo! let there be peace

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

Profound poetry, most pertinent writing, kind words, but emphatic narrative. " industries of slaughter " is really marvellous and forceful phrase.5 *s

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 March 2022

Man is so foolish and egoistic that he forgets that he is just a small dot in this vast universe.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 March 2022

Yes indeed! the world has become ' industries of slaughter' - Civilizations going haywire.... -

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 March 2022

A terrific poem most powerfully worded Kevin........10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2022

Leaders who orchestrate and go into war to acquire territories must learn from the wisdom enunciated in this great poem. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2022

Yes, people turn to savagery to increase their power and domain. Yet, life is just ephemeral and we live in just a small dot, making their conquer and power useless and futile.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2022

Powerful, incisive and very thought provoking poem with a great title.

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Richard Wlodarski 14 March 2022

You continue to amaze me with your profound poetry, Kevin! Outstanding!

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