The Blood Stream Poem by Gordon R Menzies

The Blood Stream

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I have bared myself
a black wind blows
the night snow falls
falling flakes touch
hard, invisible scars
I cannot tell if each
is a bite or a kiss
a cut or a remembrance
but they are numbing
deliciously numbing
and the blood stream
rises in twisting wisps
and drips there silently
drips silently still
in the places where
healing is unknown
and no one fishes
for fear of what
might be swimming there

Saturday, November 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: healing,memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 16 November 2019

drips silently still in the places where healing is unknown/// penned beautifully; I enjoyed the healing memory

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 16 November 2019

excellent metaphorical poem..............full score

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