Tears Of A Broken Heart Poem by Moh The Poet

Tears Of A Broken Heart

Rating: 2.0

All i pined for was a shoulder to lean on
All i knelt for was a friend to count on
Was i scraping the bottom of the barrel?
We got closer and how i lost in your world
So fast i smiled to promises you accorded
In a blink my heart was stolen
Before you'd keep it you left it swollen
How im awake at 3.00 am,
Berefet and desolated
Hoping to find my lost self

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2023

These lines I LIKE: 'As days went by my heart was stolen Before i thought you'd keep it you left it swollen Now im awake at 3.00 am, Just wishing this is not true..' line 9: 'how' OR 'now'? ? bri : )

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2023

These words don't seem correctly written: 'i gave So fast i smiled to promises you gave'. I do not understand, as they are written. ; (

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