Taking With Me Poem by Lily YANG

Taking With Me



When I don't love you,
You'd better go quickly.
When I really love you,
You'd better take with me.

Thursday, December 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
love poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernest Makuakua 22 January 2016

wow simple and to the point love it nice one L.Yang enjoyed reading keep sharing such great work inspired

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Weldon Davis 13 January 2016

Simple yet eloquent poem...I love the whole duality of it....Nice :)

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Lily Yang 24 December 2015

Thanks.Merry Christmas!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 24 December 2015

Well written, feel it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2015

True love is not a decision; it either hit the heart or leave it. Nice work.

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